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PURE GENIUS

Another great addition...

I love this series! Can't wait to see the next one.
(Pictures at an Exhibition FTW!!!)

It was nice.

It was kind of repetitive, but had a nice had a nice mellow sound to it. Not the greatest techno I've ever heard, but it kept me interested for a short while.

Too much dissonance.

I'm sorry, but there was just too much dissonance in there for me to handle. Dissonance can be used strategically, but that just made me shudder. The instruments sounded good, the background was decent, some parts of the lead guitar were nice, but the notes conflicted with each other more than a necessary amount.

A Good Start

All things considered, a nice first song. It's better than other first songs I've heard on NG. As mentioned before, be careful of volume. Really liked the ending, wished it lasted a bit longer. It was pretty repetitive, but I liked how you slowly layered more stuff on top of the base tune to build up to the ending. Still, it would have been nicer if the build up had gone a bit faster and the end was a bit longer.
Other than that, it was a nice tune, not too long and not too short, and included good instrumental choices. Based on what this song has showed me, if you work on your getting better a bit more, you'll be cranking out some nice pieces.